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This is a story summary, about 3 normal typed pages long, not a full script.
And sorry, I've kept the ending deliberately obscure.
But . . . !
I'm looking for a way to get this into production, so if you'd like to see the full thing, please contact me!
 
So . . .

A procession of circus wagons bumps through the strange Bogi Desert on a moonlit night. Posters on the sides of the wagons advertise various acts, and as the camera tracks past the windows we glimpse figures whiling away the hours of travel, catch snippets of conversation between the ringmaster, Jasper’s father, and his mother the the trap peas trainer.

The camera slows at a window of the last wagon and moves into the lamplit interior. Inside we meet Jasper, practising a new juggling trick. A tearing, scrabbling sound from the ceiling makes him stop, listening.
It recurs, grows louder, and Jasper climbs an outside ladder to the roof to investigate. Silhouetted against the moon he sees an awkward Swarmy bird tearing at the roof’s fabric. Jasper shoos it off and examines the hole it’s made. He finds a cavity containing the remains of a blue-headed lizard curled around a smooth reflective stone.


The Orbstone.

As he lifts it out a shimmering glow murmurs through it. Just then the wagon lurches sharply, and Jasper is thrown off the roof, lands hard on the desert floor and blacks out.

 
 
 
   
 
Dawn breaks. He’s woken by the bird who’s been trying to pry the stone from his grasp. He chases it off, staggers to his feet and takes stock.
Somehow he must find his way back to the circus, but for this he needs food and transport.
He surveys his surroundings, then heads for a distant building, shadowed by the bird

By midday he’s hungry, parched and exhausted, but the building is still some way off.
Wearily he drops onto a round rock and broods over the stone, the bird, and the trouble they’ve gotten him into. As the bird hops vulture-like towards him he hurls the stone at it, shouting angrily, “I need food!”.

Things happen fast. The spot where the orbstone hit the ground glows and boils with energy. The bird snatches the stone in mid-bounce and flaps awkwardly towards the building. But something rope-like shoots up at the bird, who dodges it, only to be zapped by a second ‘rope’ and dragged squawking to the ground.

Jasper looks at where the stone hit the ground and sees a rapidly sprouting stalk.
Perched on its top is a small dinner plate bearing a fresh and tasty cheese sandwhich, neatly sliced in two. Jasper tastes it suspiciously, then devours it ravenously.

 

Revitalised, he suddenly wants the stone back.
He goes to where the bird was pulled down and sees a strange sight. A large chameleon-like head poking up from the ground is swallowing down the last of the bird as if it were a large insect. It ruminates for a bit, then spits out a mechanical skeleton based on a Swiss Army Knife – the bird stripped of its outer covering – still alive but damaged and disoriented.
A moment later the orbstone too is spat out, after which the head burps, yawns, and returns to being a round rock.

Warily Jasper collects the Orbstone.
He tries throwing it again to make it produce a drink, but this time nothing happens.
He retrieves it and resumes his trek to the building, with the bird staggering far behind him.

He arrives there desperately thirsty, but pauses, incredulous, gaping at it’s strange design,
the enormous tree bursting from the building’s broken dome with its branches sprouting assorted mechanical fruits and
its snake-like roots extending out into the desert.